This is a picture of chinese dinning day.We had a lot of fun trying slightly disturbing looking food
and laughing at people who pulled faces at others when they tried food.
I really enjoyed eating and having a good time with my friends/such as george Reeves who got hot tea on his number ones!/and I would like to thank Mrs Turner for being a
great chinese teacher and host.The food at the restaurant was great even though some of it was a bit not for my taste.We had prawn dumplings ,chicken feet ,and steamed bread.
Once again I would like to thank Mrs Turner and the bus driver for organising this wonderful
day out.
Hey Hamish,
ReplyDeleteI really like this piece of writing, but just look through it again and check it because I do see some places that need more punctuation.
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Sophia Hasan-Stein.
Hey Hamish
ReplyDeleteNice writing. Next time you should check for punctuation errors like Sophia said. Otherwise it was good. Please come and check out my blog at
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Thanks
Tanika
Hi hamish nice writing on chinese dining day
ReplyDeleteThanks isabella